We have been looking at ways to write direct speech into our stories this week. Can you remember the things we found out? Watch this clip to refresh your memory:
http://www.bbc.co.uk/education/clips/zvftsbk
Task 1: Rewrite the following sentences so that the speech (and everything else) is written correctly. Can you think of some alternative words for 'said'?
what time is it asked Sachin.
let’s have chicken for dinner said Monica.
can I play on the computer Mum asked
Kayla.
i would like an ice cream please said
Zara.
that costs 12 euro said the shop-keeper.
would you like to read a book asked the
teacher.
where is the cheese asked Kayleigh.
what’s five times eight asked Miss Byrne.
hooray shouted the children.
Task 2:
Think back to the 'Staying Out' suspense story and remember how Kev tried to convince his mother to let him go camping with his friend. Please write a brief paragraph including a conversation between Kev and his mother, using all you have learned about punctuating speech. You may even try to put some persuasive language in there!
Task 1
ReplyDelete"What time is it?" asked Sachin.
"Let's have chicken for dinner," whispered Monica.
"Can I play on the computer?" mum questioned Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please," demanded Zara.
"That costs 12 euro," explained the shopkeeper.
"Would you like to read a book?" replied the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?" sobbed Kayligh.
"What's five times eight?" shouted Miss Byrne.
"Hooray!" shouted the children.
Task 2
"Please can we go camping right at the back of the garden?" asked Kev. "I promise that we will be good and stay out of trouble," he exclaimed.
"Let me speak to dad about it and then I will think of a decision as I am worried that you may fall ill" answered mum.
"OK, I hope I can. I really want to as it will be exciting and adventurous" sobbed Kev.
"What's the time?"asked Sanchin.
ReplyDelete"Let's have chicken for dinner,"said Monica.
"Can I play on the computer mum?"asked Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please,"said Zara.
"That costs 12 euro,"said the shop-keeper.
"Would you like to read a book?"asked the teacher.
"Were is the cheese?"asked Kayleigh.
"What's five times eight?"asked miss Bryne.
"Hooray!" shouted the children.
"Please can we go camping,"said Kev. "NO!!!"shouted mum."It will help our education,"explained Kev. "NO!!!!"shouted mum again. "Why?"asked Kev. "I don't want you to get hurt or get bitten by a Black Widow,"sighed mum." We will come back at 6:30 AM,"promised Kev. "Fine," sighed mum again.
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ReplyDeletetask 1
"What time is it?"asked Sachin.
"Let's have chiken for dinner,"said Monica.
"Can I play on computer mum?" asked Kayla.
"That costs 12 euro,"said the shop-keeper.
"Would you like to read a book?"asked the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?"asked Kayleigh.
"What's five times eight?"asked Miss Byrne
"Hooray!"shouted the children.
"I would like an ice cream please,"said Zara.
task 2
"Please can we go camping outside!"beged Kev."Ok but no fooling around Kev,"replied Kev's mum.Sneeking outside we picked up Kev's dads tent and set it up.
"What time is it?" asked Sachin.
ReplyDelete"Let’s have chicken for dinner!"suggested Monica.
"Can I play on the computer,Mum?" asked Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please,"said Zara.
"That costs 12 euro,"said the shop-keeper.
"Would you like to read a book?"asked the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?"asked Kayleigh.
"What’s five times eight?"asked Miss Byrne.
"Hooray!"shouted the children.
"Please mum coould I go to the wonderfull trip to go camping out"said Kev "no it's to dangerous "said Kev's mother I won't be scered " said Kev" okey but no fooling around"said kev's mother.
ReplyDeleteTask 1
ReplyDelete"What time is it?" asked Sachin.
"Let's have chicken for dinner," said happily Monica.
"Can I play on the computer?" Mum asked Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please," pleaded Zara.
"That cost 12 euro," said the shop-keeper.
"Would you like to read a book," asked the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?" asked Kayliegh
"What's five times eight," asked Miss Byren
"Hooray!" shouted the children.
Task 2
"Please can we go camp at the back of the garden mum," said Kev."Ummm..... no," thought Kev's mum."Me and my freind will be as good as gold, urrr.....we won't fool around and we won't trash the garden," pleaded Kev. "I promise," "NO!!"shouted Kev's mother. "I'll clean tomorrows dishes if you let me go camping," said Kev "Ok Kev you can go camp at the back of the garden," sighed his mother. "YAY!!!!!!!!" shouted Kev.
TASK 1
ReplyDelete1."What time is it?" asked Sachin.
2."Lets have chicken for dinner,"said Monica.
3."Can I play on the computer Mum?"questioned Kayla.
4."I would like an ice cream please,"asked Zara.
5."That costs 12 euro!"bellowed the shop keeper.
6."Would you like to read a book?"asked the teacher.
7."Where is the cheese?"whispered Kayleigh.
8."What’s five times eight?" interrogated Miss Byrne.
9.Hooray!"shouted the children.
TASK 2
"Are you sure, that you won't be scared?"said Kevs mum raising an eyebrow.
"Yes ofcourse! I'm very sure that I won't be scared."pleaded Kev.
"What if it is to dark?"asked mum.
"I'm not scared of the dark!" assured Kev.
"What will you eat then?".
"You will pack up some sandwich ofcourse!... won't you?"
"Oh alright, just this time you'll go on the camping trip but I hope it is like you said...".
Task 1:
ReplyDelete‘What time is it?’ questioned Sachin.
‘Let’s have chicken for dinner,’ said Monica.
‘Can I play on the computer Mum? asked Kayla.
‘I would like an ice cream please,’ ordered Zara.
‘That costs 12 euros,’ snapped the shop-keeper.
‘Would you like to read a book?’ enquired the teacher.
‘Where is the cheese?’ queried Kayleigh.
‘What are five times eight?’ demanded Miss Byrne.
‘Hooray!’ shouted the children.
Task 2:
Task 2:
Kev and his mum were in the kitchen when, Kev asked ‘Can I go on a camping trip mum?’ Kev’s mum looked down on him.
‘If you do, you won’t be able to do your jobs, will you?’ she replied. ‘I’ll do them tomorrow then,’ he responded.
‘But I always get worried about you Kevin!’ Kev’s mum exclaimed.
‘Don’t worry mum, I will call you when I get there and I will text you when I go to sleep,’ he answered.
‘Oh, alright, but you have to wash my car and, do the jobs,’ Kev’s mum sighed.
‘Yeah!’ Kev screamed then he covered his mouth and whispered ‘yeah!’
Task 1-
ReplyDelete"What time is it?" asked Sachin.
"Let'shave chicken for dinner?" suggested Monica.
"Can I play on the computer mum?" begged Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please" Zara selected
"That costs 12 euros" explained the shopkeeper.
"Would you like to read a book?"asked the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?"yelled Kaleigh.
"What's five times eight?" Miss Byrne asked.
"Hooray!"shouted the children.
Task 2
"Oohh please, oohh please can I go camping mum?"Kev moaned
"Alright, alright you can go camping,but no fooling around" mum replied.
With excitement Kev jumped up and down with joy"wohooo"
Kev and his friend darted to the garden, excitedly geting their tent they were going to use.
"What time is it?" asked Sachin.
ReplyDelete"Let’s have chicken for dinner" said Monica.
"Can I play on the computer Mum?" asked Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please" said Zara.
"That costs 12 euro" said the shop-keeper.
"Would you like to read a book?"asked the teacher.
"where is the cheese?" asked Kayleigh.
"What’s five times eight?" asked Miss Byrne.
"Hooray!"shouted the children.
2
"Mum please let us go camping" said Kev. "Absolutely no!" said his mother."We will be as good as gold"mum. "Ok but be good,"said mum.
"Ok" replied Kev.
Task 1:
ReplyDelete"What time is it?" questioned Sachin.
"Lets have chicken for dinner," demanded Monica.
"Can I play on the computer Mum?" called Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please," requested Zara.
"That costs 12 euros," demanded the shop-keeper.
"Would you like to read a book?" beckoned the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?" told Kayleigh.
"What's five times eight?" inquired Miss Byrne.
"Hooray!" exclaimed the children.
Task 2:
"Pleaseee, Mum, can we go outside to go camping?" exclaimed Kevin.
"Kev are you sure you want to go outside all alone with no one else but your friend there with you?" asked Mum.
"Don't worry Mum, my friend will be there with me every step of the way and if we get scared. we will call you. Please let me go..." replied Kevin.
"Fine, you can go but stay out of harms way," sighed mum.
Task 1:
ReplyDelete“What time is it?” asked Sachin.
“Let’s have chicken for dinner,” said Monica.
“Can I play on the computer Mum ?” masked Kayla.
“I would like an ice cream please, “said Zara.
“That costs 12 euro,” said the shop-keeper.
“Would you like to read a book?” asked the teacher.
“Where is the cheese?” asked Kayleigh.
“What’s five times eight?” asked Miss Byrne.
“Hooray!” shouted the children.
Task 2:
“Hello mother” said Kev.
“Hello my dear” answer mum.
“Me and my friend Adam we want to go camping, please can you allow us to go?” Kev was hoping for a positive answer.
“I don' t think that' s a good idea,” frowned mum. “It would be best if and adult would come with you,” mum explained.
“But mum, we promise we aren’t going far, we will be good gold,” said Kev trying to be very convincing.
“What if you get lost?” worried mum.
“We wound' t mum, please can we go?” begged her Kev.
“Alright but no fooling around please,” said mother.
“However please be careful there,” mum answered slightly concerned that something will happen to them.
“Thank you!” shouted Kev.
“You are the best !” he exclaimed.
Task1:
ReplyDelete"What time is it?" asked Sachin.
"Let's have chicken for dinner,"said Monica.
"Can I play on the computer Mum?"called Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please," said Zara.
"That costs 12 euro,"replied the shop-keeper.
"Would you like to read a book?"asked the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?"asked Kayleigh.
"What's five times eight?"asked Miss Byrne.
"Hooray!"shouted the children.
Task 2:
"Please Mum please can we go camping just at the bottom of the garden!"exclaimed Kev."OK, alright but stay out of mischief,"sighed Kev's mum.We both jumped with excitement.Finally,at last we can go camping in the garden.
Task 1:
ReplyDelete" What time is it?" asked Sachin.
"Let's have chicken for dinner." said Monica.
"Can i play on the computer, mum?" asked Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream, please."said Zara.
"That costs 12 euro." said the shop keeper.
"Would you like to read a book?" asked the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?" asked Kayleigh.
"What's five times eight?" asked MISS Byrne.
"Hooray!" shouted the children.
Instead of said, we can use: admitted, asked, murmured, replied, shouted.
Task 2:
Kev said:"please mum, can we go camping tonight?"
Mum replied:"no my dear, you still young to go camping."
Kev said:"but we will be good as gold, in addition, im not going by my self.im going with my friend."
Mum replied:"aha, ok but you must come home tomorow before 8 o'clock
because you have school the day after and you need to sleep early."
Mum added:" you can do camping in the garden behind the house."
Kev shouted:" horray!! thanks mum, i love you soo much."
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Task one:
ReplyDelete"What time is it?" asked Sara.
"Let's have chicken for dinner," said Monica.
"Can I play on the computer mum?" questioned Wisp.
"I would like an ice cream please," asked Gigi.
"That costs 12 euro," replied the shop-Keeper.
"Would you like to read a book?" asked the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?" asked Kayleigh.
"What’s five times eight?" said Miss Byrne.
"Hooray!" shouted the children.
Task two:
"Please can we go to the camping trip" Said Kev, begging for the answer yes. "Too risky" said mum "It won't be harmful at all. We have our exploring badges" replied Kev." That doesn't mean anything because you went with an adult and I can't come". "I'm awfully tired" explained Kev's mum. "There aren't any scary animals outside" said Kev. “If I say no that means no" said mum. "when you are older Kev, like 10 or 11 years old, you can go camping but stay out of mayhem when you go! Also then you can take a friend with you to the camping trip." explained mum. "Alright, alright, I'll go when I'm older" replied Kev.
Task 1
ReplyDelete"What time is it?" asked Sachin.
"Let's have chicken for dinner," announced Monica.
"Can I play on the computer?" mum questioned Kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please," shouted Zara.
"That costs 12 euro," whispered the shopkeeper.
"Would you like to read a book?" replied the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?" yelled Kayligh.
"What's five times eight?" shouted Miss Byrne.
"Hooray!" shouted the children.
Task 2
"Please can we go camping right at the back of the garden?" asked Kev. How exciting!!! Shouted mom "I promise that we will be good and stay out of trouble," he exclaimed.
"Let me speak to dad about joining you" answered mum.
"OK, I hope he would come!!! Whispered kev. I really want to as it will be exciting and adventurous" sobbed Kev.
Task 1:
ReplyDelete"What time is it?"asked Sachin.
"Let's have chicken for dinner,"whispered Monica.
"Can I play on the computer Mum?"yelled kayla.
"I would like an ice cream please,"asked Zara.
"That costs 12 euro."exclaimed the shop-keeper.
"Would you like to read a book?"said the teacher.
"Where is the cheese?"questioned Kayleigh.
"What's five times eight?"shouted Miss Byrne.
"Hooray!" shouted the children.
Task 2:
"Please can we go mum!"begged Kev.
"To were?"asked mum.
"To the amazon river,"shouted Kev.
"Ok fine but stay out of trouble,"sighed mum.
"You are the best." said Kev