Use the picture below as inspiration to write a legendary story. It should be no more than 100 words.
Remember to include:
Remember to include:
- correct punctuation and capital letters
- past tense
- adverb sentence starters
- detailed description of character and setting
- similes
- a reward
- speech
The dragon disaster
ReplyDeleteOnce apon a time there lived a dragon who loved eating people.Every day the people had been feeding the dragon so it could never eat the poor villages.One day the dragon became very hungry so it chased the people.When he arrived he saw a person who was watering his plants. As this dragon was not very friendly,he decided to gobble him up.It was a good man. He got his sword and sliced the dragon's heads of. The dragon fell down with a big thump. His two heads landed near the village. The village thanked the man and made him there king. Soon the town became very rich.They lived happily ever after. By Arjun
Jakub
ReplyDeleteLong ago there lived a man called Jakub one morrning. The ultimate Jakub set of towords the spooky and unpredictebel rain forest sudenly he saw a village being destroyed by a gigant rock and coal monser.
Soon the swift beast had gone but he had capcherd the tribe men leeders pets he would give Jakub 100 coco beans if he could slay this beast.
Swiftly Jakub got on his hourse and set of to the monsters cave.Silently Jakub freed the pets then he killed the beast and soon he got back to the town and got 100 coco beans hura yay.
Well Done Jakub! could You write a bigger story next time?
DeleteEarly one morning the strong Vapreeon set off to London. When he arrived there, he saw a dragon terrorising the city and eating the people.The dragon was so enormous that it was eating 10 people at once. The dragon then kidnapped the King of London. Vapreeon went to the palace and said "I'll save the King." The Queen offerred him 1000 rubys if he could save the King and kill the beast.
ReplyDeleteVapreeon rode into the dark forest and saw the King waiting to be fed to the dragon. Quickly Vapreeon freed the King and sent him to the shiny palace. When the dragon heard the king escaping he came out of his cave and roared. Vapreeon was not afraid. Vapreeon threw his spear but the dragon's scales were very hard so the spear broke. Vapreeon got down from his horse and rushed at the dragon to slay it under it's wing. Suddenly the dragon fell to the ground with a roar of pain. The dragon was defeated.
The Queen invited Vapreeon to the palace. The King thanked Vapreeon and gifted him 1000 rubys.
I really liked your story because Vaporeon was a very very brave boy.
DeleteEarly one morning the strong Vapreeon set off to London. When he arrived there, he saw a dragon terrorising the city and eating the people.The dragon was so enormous that it was eating 10 people at once. The dragon then kidnapped the King of London. Vapreeon went to the palace and said "I'll save the King." The Queen offerred him 1000 rubys if he could save the King and kill the beast.
ReplyDeleteVapreeon rode into the dark forest and saw the King waiting to be fed to the dragon. Quickly Vapreeon freed the King and sent him to the shiny palace. When the dragon heard the king escaping he came out of his cave and roared. Vapreeon was not afraid. Vapreeon threw his spear but the dragon's scales were very hard so the spear broke. Vapreeon got down from his horse and rushed at the dragon to slay it under it's wing. Suddenly the dragon fell to the ground with a roar of pain. The dragon was defeated.
The Queen invited Vapreeon to the palace. The King thanked Vapreeon and gifted him 1000 rubys.
A Long time ago for seven hills behind seven rivers and five lakes
ReplyDeletelived a little boy named Filip. He lived in a small villige were a
evil wizerd called Inferno. All people was sceared of him because he was steeling their food and money. One day he went on the field to feed his sheeps. Then he found a lovely stone and he decided to take it home. He put it under his pillow and went to sleep. In midnight he felt his pillow moving so he moved the pillow out of
the way and he saw his stone starting to glow and move. He discovered that it wasn't a stone it was a egg then the shell broke
and he saw a dragon. He alweys gave him food from his school and the dragon been growing up realy fast about 5 feets tall every day. It grew that big that he couldn't ceep it. so he said "I am sorry
but I can't keep you eny more. " Then the dragon started talking
it said "you did somthing for me and I do somthing for you "so then
the dragon ate the evil wizerd and the people lived happily ever
after.
Was the little boy called Filip you?
DeleteThe Jabberwocky:
ReplyDeleteA long mythical time ago there lived a ferocious,blood-thirsty monster called the Jabberwocky!It was a complete terrorist and kept gobbling up all the people of Saudi Arabia.However,it had caught the young princess Jasmine!Luckily,there was a brave and solemn night who could save her.Her name was Saint Victoria the third.Her family had also once been nights and went to slay the Jabberwocky but unfortunately they never made it alive.Saint Victoria was offered one thousand one zillion golden coins if she could slay the vicious beast!Saint Victoria went through a ginormous sandstorm just to find the lovely princess.At last S.T Victoria was with the princess and told her to go home before the blood-drinking monster awoke.Suddenly,the beast woke and let out a blood chilling roar whilst the princess ran.Saint Victoria stabbed it with her lance and the beastly monster fell to the ground with a.......THUMP!saint Victoria celebrated her victory and received her medal!The End!
Your character s name is very original. I really liked the name Jabberwoky because it sound really nice also your story was captivating.Well done Misbah.
DeleteThanks Misbah, I loved your story and the way you wrote “A long mythical time ago…” just got me into the scene so long ago so mythical and magical, also I liked your adjectives, just astonishing work Misbah. Well done!
DeleteWow Misbah!You are superb at writing storys!you should be a writer when you grow up.......
DeleteOnce upon a time,
ReplyDeleteThere was a country called Ancient Greece. One day a person called Sir Leo travelled there because he had heard of a ferocious, evil, horrible and grotesque monster who had taken the king's pet eagle. The king offered 1,000,000 pieces of gold if he could slay the vicious creature.
Sir Leo travelled to the beast's slimy, spiky and gloomy cave. He saw
the pet eagle trapped in a secure cage. Sir Leo quickly freed the eagle and sent it to the gleaming palace. Sir Leo quietly tiptoed into the cave.
Sir Leo had defeated the creature and was rewarded the 1,000,000 pieces of gold!
Good ajectives Arveer
DeleteA very long time ago,
ReplyDeleteThere was a man called flash and he traveled to Dubai. He went to Dubai because there was a horrifying,grotesque and horrible monster. The monster was horrible as a bat. the grotesque beast had taken the king's pet parrot. The king asked the flash to kill the beast if he had killed the horrifying beast he would be offered 9,000,000 money. Flash was fast as light.
The flash traveled to the beast's dark,gloomy and spiky cave.He went in the cave and he saw the cage that the parrot was stuck in.He opened it quietly!Flash freed the parrot and the parrot was so excited!
I love how you used the power of three!"The flash traveled to the beast's dark,gloomy and spiky cave..."
DeleteThank you Misbah!
DeleteOnce upon a time,a brave man called st David lived.Once he went to Poland.Poland was a peaceful and quiet country it was one for now.Suddenly,someone shouted "HELP,HELP."When he arrived there.... nothing could be seen. Sadly,the princess of Poland was stolen. Everybody was scared.
ReplyDeleteOnce st David was jogging and a boy said"go to the king."So st David went to the king.When he arrived the king said"I will give you 1,000 gold bars if you overcome the demon."St David was fearless and as strong as metal.
He went to a city.St David freed the princess silently.He sent her to the castle of Poland.He saw a majestic,black,scaly dragon.The dragon was so scary but he wasn't scared.
He cut out the demons eye ball and his heart.Then he walked away but....SUDDENLY,it jumped at him.They fell to the ground but the demon was all covered in blood.St David sliced the dragon's body in half.DEAD!!!! The king gave him his 1,000 gold bars.THE END.
Love your similes Marcelina!
DeleteThe legend of Saint Georde
ReplyDeleteBefore your mums and dads were even born , in the almost forgotten land of Abrador, there lived a terrifying dragon as big as a mountain and with wings as
long as a plain. Sometimes the land seemed completely abandoned,
you could even niff peoples fear. Occasionally the sun used to shine
and that was a good sign...the fiercely dragon was away.
Those days streets were full of people rushing nervously to markets to buy food and other supplies. However, you could never know how long peaceful days would last...
Born in the same day when the dragon first appeared ...Saint Georde,
a mighty young knight,with hair as blond as gold and eyes like thunder
was courageously fighting the dragon and defending the people.
The legend said that his mother lost her life soon after she gave
birth. His magnificent and glorious father Sir Saint Georde,
protected him with his life but sadly killed too quickly by the cruel
and filthy dragon.
When found by the people the baby was wounded as well,but healing
by itself.He grew up fearless, faster and stronger than any other child.
From injury at birth his blood mixed blood the dragons and he got
some special powers. A special bond accidentally happened between
the powerful dragon and Saint Georde the great !
Finally he defeated the gigantic dragon and his name was always feared
and respected!Since then Saint Georde the great is always fighting
dragons in the long forgotten land of Abrador.
Lovely story Cezar!I like how you used "Before your mums and dads were even born , in the almost forgotten land of Abrador, there lived......"
DeleteLong ago there was a beautiful island called Ancient Greece and a handsome man called Robin Hood went to Ancient Greece when he got their he saw the birds singing he could not wait for the food in the market and he has no money so ran to the town and did not see the princess so Robin went to the dark and gloomy cave.
ReplyDeleteBravely, Robin saw the ferocious beast sleeping and the princess was waiting to be killed by the ferocious best and Robin freed the princess form the ferocious beast and Robin went and killed the ferocious beast in his heart and the princess and Robin got married and also his Robins mom and dad got so money and they had a grate time.
We are so grateful for Robin Hood The End.
Once upon a time there was a boy called Rider. " I live in a house that I made by myself." There was also a big , colossal dragon hurting every one. The dragon stole lots of famous people that work hard. Surprisingly, something bad happened, the ferocious dragon stole Santa Clause. Rider would be given one reindeer if he could save Santa. Rider said yes and set off to save Santa Clause. He got his sword and killed this horrible, big beast. Santa and Rider flew home in Santa's amazing, shiny slay. Rider was rewarded with the greatest reindeer in the world.
ReplyDeleteCenturies ago, far away, lived an old man named jack. jack was a very wised man with long, white hair and beard. Always holding a long stick in his hand and wearing a long black gown.
ReplyDeleteOne day, a giant, scary, terrifiying dragon attacked the village looking for food. He was so hungry and he was chasing people to eat them. H e was breathing fire that burned every thing around him until he saw jack, the old man.
The dragon tried to eat jack but something weird happened, like a magical power stopped him. Jack said to the dragon:" If you stop eating people, I'll give you food to eat but, in your turn, you have to protect the village and people living in". T he dragon agreed and became the guard of that village and every body lived happily ever after.
by habib
Zack the knight
ReplyDeleteIn a far away land where dragons ruled the kingdom Zack the knight was called to save the day.Zack Was a brave,strong and fearless knight he had a magical sword that was sharp as a knife.Zack entered the kingdom he could smell fire flames and hear people screaming"help somebody save us".Zack rushed to the rescue he came face to face with the largest and meanest looking dragon.Zack could feel the dragons smoke from his nostrils,Zack drew his sword and reached up with all his might killing the dragon.The dragon fell to the ground with a great big thud,the peolpe cheered with joy they no longer had to be scared.
The End
Little George was excited about getting the King’s daughter’s hand in marriage. George ran outside to a mighty, humungous dragon which roared angrily. Suddenly, the dragon swung his tail at George but missed him. He sighed with enthusiasm as the beast roared fiercely at him, so Little George whipped his spear in the dragon’s face. The dragon got so cross about him that he puffed with fire so Little George’s spear melted into the ground. Little George was amazed but determined to defeat the monster, so he dragged his sword out of his pocket stabbed the dragon in the stomach.
ReplyDeleteFantastic adjectives Elisha
Deleteand amazing description.
Did Little George get rewarded with the Kings daughters hand in marriage?
Thousand of years ago there was a man called Timi. He lived in a village in North Scotland. Timi was young but as brave as a knight.Every night Timi's village got attacked by a dragon that killed the animals. His breath burned houses and destroyed fields. People were horrified and run away. Timi had enough and he said ''I will kill this dragon and the village will be save''. Some day Timi made a trap for the dragon. It was a sheep phantom with poison inside. Timi left the sheep on the filed and waited for the dragon. When the beast landed on the filed he took the sheep and ate it. Then all of a sudden the dragon fell to the ground and he died. The people in the village were very grateful to Timi and they made him as there king.
ReplyDeleteThe Dragon and the Knight:
ReplyDeleteOne day in the middle of Denmark, an enormous big winged, scaly dragon lived outside a village. It was stamping vigorously, the villagers felt that there was an earth quake. Someone named Saint Maxy, was getting tired of this destruction. So he tried to kill the beast. Ih he could slay the terrifying dragon, he could get all the dragon's power for good. With his sword he tried to kill it's scaly bit. But the dragon's scales were as hard as rock, so he slayed it in its eye. The beast was finally killed, so Saint Maxy got all the dragon's power.
Fearless Fareeha and the Blusterous Beast:
ReplyDeleteLong ago valiant Fareeha traversed to Delhi where a dreadful beast lived, who kidnapped the Mayor. Soon an announcement was made saying, “whoever slays the vicious beast and frees the mayor will turn into a celebrity.” Fareeha learned that the grotesque beast lived in the Himalayas and reached there. Courageously, she charged into the dark and gloomy cave where she trod on a twig and the bloodcurdling beast awoke from its slumber. As fast as a rocket, she slayed the beast plunging his heart with her shimmering sword. The mayor was a free bird! Fareeha was soon a celebrity!
I love how you described your beast Fareeha!Well done!
DeleteWow Fareeha!I realy like how you used"Fearless Fareeha and the Blusterous Beast..."
DeleteAwesome Fareeha!Your story is magnificent!Just got me into the scene!
DeleteA long time ago lived a heroine called Grace Timbug.She was always brave,fearless and very strong.One day the King of Egypt's son was lost from the evil Queen's ferocious, gigantic pet.The King said to Grace" If you kill the beast ,you shall marry my son.So Grace was given a shinny as sliver sword.Grace found the smelly cave where the beast lived.When the beast wasn't looking she took out the sword and killed him.Finally, Grace was married and lived happily ever after.THE END!
ReplyDeleteMia this is a amazing story.You should become a writer when you grow up!!
DeleteThe legend of st Ash
ReplyDelete10000 years ago there lived a noble knight called st Ash he loved adventures,since he loved adventures he went to the ancient and mythical England he seemed to have loved that place.The next day in the amazing ancient England he heard people talking about a fearsome and terrible dragon had flew into England. St ash had been trained to be a incredible knight.The next day in England the king did not have a good day the terrible dragon had wiped out the kings castle but worst of all the dragon had took his crown and if he could slay the beast,he would get 1000 pieces of money.St ash quickly traveled to the cave were the dragon had lived.St ash was scared he took the crown and put it in his pocket,then he charged in bravely he had awoken the beast he had to fight it to the death he slashed its super shiny scales but it simply broke and shattered into pieces like glass but the he hit it on its head the dragon exploded BOOM!.When he had arrived to England again he went to the king and the king and the townspeople shouted HOORAY!! And the people never forgot the hero that saved there lives and st ash kindly took his money and went home.
THE END
Wow Sujeeth!I love all your adjectives!
Delete1 million years ago there was a brave,unbeatable and friendly person called Eline Shane and he found a weird slug called an Infurnus and he also found a sort of gun. He put the Infurnus in the gun and it got shot and turned into a different thing.
ReplyDeleteThe mysterious and fiery slug was researched before Eline was born and it said that this mysterious transformation was called a Mega Morph. It actually said that you can use it in duels. An enormous tree crashed down on to an extremely damaged bridge and it broke down. What was going on with that red and yellow creature? When Eline entered a tournament he found out it was a place where you duel. Eline was first againt a person called Shockwire who only had Tazering slugs.
At the end Shockwire lost and Eline won every battle in the tournament. Unfortunately, someone called Dr.Blakk turned slugs into ghouls which are evil slugs. Something had to be done. Eline was chosen to defeat him in a duel so he was given a stick that does fusion shots.
The lair was full of guards when he arrived but luckily here was a vent that he could crawl through. Before Eline had went a person told him that if he could defeat Dr. Blakk he could keep the fusion stick forever. Eline said it was a good deal. When he jumped into the lair Docter Blakk saw him.
A Crystalyd was shot with the Infurnus and the fusion shot was like two elements mixed up together. The amazing power of the shot was so strong it blasted Dr. Blakk all the way to space!!! Finally Eline could keep the stick but he was very exhausted so he had a cup of lemonade. The crowd was shouting with happiness and said "We will never forget this time all our life!" and Eline was celebrated all over land.
The Jabberwocky
ReplyDeleteOnce there was a young girl called saint Alice and a blood chilling beast called the jabberwocky which lived in place named "The land of the dead". The land of the dead was 1,000,000 miles away from Smile town (Smile town is actually where saint Alice lived!). One day the queen of smile town was asking if someone could save the beautiful princess. She would offer 10,000 gold bars to anyone who saved the princess ,so saint Alice travelled all the way to the land of dead to attack the jabberwocky. When she got there, saint Alice took her sharp as a shard sword out and threw it towards the dragon but shockingly missed the dragon. Next, she remembered that the jabberwocky had bad eye sight so she slowly walked towards the colossal beast. Then, when saint Alice was at the mighty beast's toe she gently climbed up to it's neck, took her spear and finally killed the jabberwocky!"Yes!"said saint Alice"I did it!".
THE END!
Lovely story Ipshita!Just one question,why did you copy the movie"Alice in Wonderland?"
DeleteWe really enjoyed reading these out in class, as well as the stories that came in on paper. We were very impressed by the description of the beast and the hero in the stories. Your ideas were brilliant!
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